Since I don't know the RL names of many people I just put down alll the
comments I've received.  Some have been paraphrased while none are in
their complete lengthy forms.  Just picked out their major
praises/criticisms.

"Loved it"

"Too short." "Good use of Bonecrusher" "Hook is presented as more cunning 
than he should be"

"Very, very nice." "Not enough use of Huffer"

"Very good" "Not enough information on Hook's device"

"Would they really be building when a war is going on?" "Interesting spin
on pre-war bot-con relations"

"Great story" "Should have sequel" "Long Haul changes too quickly
personality-wise"

"Perhaps too happy ending" "Really liked it" "Good basic idea" "Devastator
acts too dumb to be so much under Hook's control" "Some contradictions
with Hasbro version of Long Haul's character"

"Great" "Ending needed some work"